Market day - Persuasive Text

In my opinion I agree that we should do market day because first we could earn money Second we get have fun and lastly we get to advertise.

First of all I agree because we could earn some money for a class trip or buy equipment that the school needs.We could maybe have a goal to earn.Then we could use the money towards a trip or something.we could also half our money and share with the school and have some money for our class.We could buy some equipment for the class or for the school that is needed and wanted.

Second of all I think that it could be really fun,It is a great way for us to interact with others and be active.We could have fun doing this,it would be pressure but it can be fun also.It let's us interact with others and meet new people and discover what people like.We can also show the teachers how we can do different things,just like advertising and marketing.

Lastly I think it's a really great idea to advertise as well because when we grow up we could be marketing or advertising.Some of us might like to be marketers and advertise what they are trying to sell.We might as well be good at marketing when we grow up because we are staring while we are young.Advertising could be for anything.So when it comes to us selling things we will be already good.

Finally in my opinion i think that it is an awesome idea to do market day.It is a fun activity and it lets us interact with others.It especially helps us with the money.

How to make an awesome blog comment

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We have been learning about what goes into a good blog comment. I learned that you need to leave positive feedback and compliment the person on their learning. I also learned that it is important to describe how you feel about their learning and make a connection with them. Something you could do is offer them some advice to make it better and inspire them. If you have info that might help them, it's worth putting it in.

It is really important to greet them when you write the comment. If you speak a different language, you could use it. This week is Cook Island Maori language week, so we could open our comments with Kia orana. 

Now I have learned about what goes into a blog comment, I am going to use it when commenting on other people's blog. Thanks for reading my work, please leave me a comment.