Narrative Writing Week 4

This week for writing our class did narrative writing. Narrative writing is a fictional writing where you can write a story based on anything and using your imagination to build a story and make it fictional. In my own time I spent time watching funny, amazing and even emotional X factor auditions. I then decided to write a story as if I was the judge and what happened then. Here is my writing.

Beginning:

It was a beautiful day in Australia. It was the first day of X factor auditions, I was one of the judges and I felt very excited to see what kind of talents were out there. The first person to audition was a lady, all dressed up and eyes with highlighted purple eye shadow. she said she was going to sing a very complicated song. She shakily sang like this, “hooheehoooheehooheehoheehoooheehuuuheee! ” Me and the other judges started laughing and she stopped. Her singing was funnier than a cow trying to sing. We all said no and she exited the auditioning room. Next was a tall blonde haired man, he sang and sang and sang and sang, It didn’t stop and even one of the judges next to me were sleeping.

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Next was a 17 year old girl. She wore black ripped jeans with an ombre top, red bandana and was ready, holding her microphone. She sang ‘ who’s loving you ‘  She was absolutely unbelievably amazing, her voice was as low-key and powerful at the same time. The crowd was on their feet and absolutely amazed. She cried proud tears and we all praised her, and we all said yes. Next up was a group of filipino girls, they were named 4th impact. They sang ‘ Bang Bang ’ and they performed along with a sassy dance. I was absolutely blown away, even the crowd were on their feet clapping and cheering. I loved them and the judges and I said yes and they started crying, because it was their dream.

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End:

The last was a 24 year old guy named James Arthur. He sang an acoustic version of a judge's song. His singing was perfect and he probably became a celebrity already. All of us judges said yes and he was so thankful.The crowd cheered and clapped for him as he left the stage.

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At the end I actually liked writing fictional stories and so I enjoyed this task very much. I think maybe next time I should work on, writing about something totally out of the blue and from my imagination and not just re-write about something that has happened in real life.