Market day - Persuasive Text

In my opinion I agree that we should do market day because first we could earn money Second we get have fun and lastly we get to advertise.

First of all I agree because we could earn some money for a class trip or buy equipment that the school needs.We could maybe have a goal to earn.Then we could use the money towards a trip or something.we could also half our money and share with the school and have some money for our class.We could buy some equipment for the class or for the school that is needed and wanted.

Second of all I think that it could be really fun,It is a great way for us to interact with others and be active.We could have fun doing this,it would be pressure but it can be fun also.It let's us interact with others and meet new people and discover what people like.We can also show the teachers how we can do different things,just like advertising and marketing.

Lastly I think it's a really great idea to advertise as well because when we grow up we could be marketing or advertising.Some of us might like to be marketers and advertise what they are trying to sell.We might as well be good at marketing when we grow up because we are staring while we are young.Advertising could be for anything.So when it comes to us selling things we will be already good.

Finally in my opinion i think that it is an awesome idea to do market day.It is a fun activity and it lets us interact with others.It especially helps us with the money.

How to make an awesome blog comment

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We have been learning about what goes into a good blog comment. I learned that you need to leave positive feedback and compliment the person on their learning. I also learned that it is important to describe how you feel about their learning and make a connection with them. Something you could do is offer them some advice to make it better and inspire them. If you have info that might help them, it's worth putting it in.

It is really important to greet them when you write the comment. If you speak a different language, you could use it. This week is Cook Island Maori language week, so we could open our comments with Kia orana. 

Now I have learned about what goes into a blog comment, I am going to use it when commenting on other people's blog. Thanks for reading my work, please leave me a comment.

My holiday

Holiday

First of all I had an awesome holiday but I’m going to talk about my favourite parts of my holiday.

In the holidays I went over to my auntie’s house and I had sleepover with my cousins and also stayed there for 3 more days.One night we played on my other cousin’s PS2 and we played a game called BUZZ.It was fun and we played all night,for me I wanted to play everyday and not stop because it was all these challenges where we have points and everything.Even though I kept losing I was keen to keep playing.Me and my cousin just woke up at 10 in the afternoon and we started laughing because we thought it was still morning.Another night we had dinner and then when we finished we played Monopoly and it was also fun.

On Friday we cleaned and then me and my cousin went to the Library and waited for my aunty and cousin to go clean the car and buy the tickets for the movies.We were planning to watch The BFG. We went to Sylvia Park where the Hoyts where.When we got there it was raining hard out. We bought all our food and also took food we had bought earlier,we went straight into the theatre.I couldn’t wait till we watched the movie.The movie was called the BFG if I didn’t mention and it was about a little girl named Sophie and she was friends with a Big Friendly Giant which she called BFG.The BFG would always get bullied by the other giants in giant land or something.The BFG’s job was catching dreams and he would go places and blow them into peoples minds while they are sleeping and they get good dreams.Sophie was kept a secret to only the BFG.Anyways I should stop because I wouldn’t want to spoil it for whoever may watch it.Anyways and hour later the movie was finished and I really loved the movie.When the movie finished we went home to get my bags and I went back to my nana’s house and stayed for a bit.At the end of the holidays I felt happy to have fun and have time off school to spend time with my family.Anyways hope you liked my holiday story.       

CYBERSMART

Were you surprised by any of the results and number of times you visited some sites?

I was very surprised because I thought that it would have been small of amounts of times I've been on them

How many different websites do you think you visit in 24hrs on average?

I think that it may have been 5 - 10

Do you think it would be different if you did this on a weekday or weekend?

Yes I'm pretty sure because then it would more private and personal

Welcome

Welcome to my very own blog for learning. I look forward to sharing my learning with teachers, my school, my family and friends anywhere.

MY WEEKEND!!!

It was Sunday morning we woke up and to our surprise it was 9:45 !!!!!  We were in a hurry because our church starts at 10,we got ready,rushed out the door like someone was telling us to get outside because there is a fire.  We got there maybe 15 minutes late but at least we made it to church.  I went to Sunday school and we looked at bible verses.  After that we looked at these books that I forgot what they were called and they showed new and stuff.

We had to find out which of them showed respect.  We looked at different ones and this time we had to look for something that described the verses in the bible,we shared around the table and some were awesome.  A few minutes later we looked at all these coins that the Sunday school teacher had from many countries.  We had to figure out what the countries of the money were and I actually figured out the US coins because I had learnt them from Khan Academy which was awesome.

 Sunday school was over and our whole church always has these cup tea rosters every Sunday and everyone was enjoying their cup of tea.Later on we finally went home and had a heated spaghetti sandwich.It was 2:00 in the afternoon but it actually looked dark and that it was night.  My dad needed to do something at the mall and we went to ST.LUKES.  When we got there it was as packed as a crowd in the most popular concert.

 My dad went to check his phone or something and then we went to the food court.
  "PEUPOUPEUPOBONGBING!!!!!!!" this annoying little boy kept yelling inside a rolled paper.When his mum said said it was time to go I was relieved.We ate and we headed to K -mart. Finally we went home and believe it or not,it was 5:00 and we were there at 2:00.Anyways we headed home and played around,watched t.v and then we went to sleep.At the end of the day I felt happy and excited for Monday.

IN THE WEEKENDS

IN THE WEEKENDS........



So basically I woke up on Saturday morning and I went to Netball.  when I got there, nobody was there  and I think it was cancelled so I went home.I just cleaned my room and hopped into bed and watched Fresh on tv 2.On that Saturday's episode included the laughing samoans and it introduced how they got together and how the show was possible.Another part I liked was the TAU TA'LA'TALA or something where there are different guests and they talk and ya it was funny and awesome.

Next my mum and her friend and I went for a cup of tea and then we went shopping.My mum had to go work so I went stayed with my mums friend and she was very kind,her name was Margaret.I asked her if she needed any tidying up and she said yes.We cleaned up all these boxes of celebration cards that she got given.She said if I hadn't been there she would've token hours doing it.Her mum died and she had all these stuff given to her that her mother had owned.It was in these boxes and we just had a look and she told me all about her family.

Some hours later my mum came and she picked both of us up and we went to have dinner.We went to this restaurant in dominion road which was called ROAST MEALS and they had different meat that were roasted of course.We went to drop Margaret off and we went home.When we got home we had a rest and went to sleep.